During the process of Blog 2 Draft 1 I completely did the wrong thing, which you can tell. I talked to classmates and the instructor on what to change about it. Honestly this draft was done in a rush and it was not worthy to be presented. The final draft I belief was a lot better. It has detailed information on tattoos about the regulations, history, and safety. The final draft was a lot harder to right than the first mainly because it was not opinion based like the first.